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Chapter 1:Knowing

My name is Andrea Cannon Payne I´m 17 years old, I am a tall girl with green eyes and brown curly hair.I have a brother his name is Liam,he don´t like the name Cannon so his friends call him Liam and all the teachers call us Mr. and Mrs.Payne.He is tall and he have brown hair,he is 18.We just move from USA to UK.We were born in England but because of dad´s work we move a lot around the world,but we are now back in England.We just get in Webber University.It was my first day at school when everything happened.I get in to the classroom and the teacher present me.

Teacher:Class she´s our new student Mrs.Payne!!!

You:Where can I sit?

Teacher:Sit between Mr.Malik and Mr.Tomlinson.

The guy that it´s named Mr.Malik by the teacher it´s better called Zayn his a tall guy with black hair and a blond ray in his hair,he got brown eyes and he is a good friend of Liam from a lot of years.And the guy that it´s named Mr.Tomlinson it´s better called Louis he is a guy a little bit tall,he got clear eyes like a day without clouds it´s the perfect boy for me,and I think that just in seconds I fall in love with him.

Zayn:Hi darling.

Louis:Zayn stop bothering her.

You:Don´t worry I´m okay.

Louis:Are u sure?

You:Yes I´m sure.

Louis:Do you want me to show you the school at brake time?....

You:Sure,it will be nice.

Zayn:Louis stop saying stupid things,I will show it to her.

Louis:Shut up Zayn.

Teacher:Hey people!!!

Zayn:What teacher?..

Teacher:Are u all the people Mr.Malik?..

Zayn:No...

Teacher:Well shut up

Everybody at the classroom start laughing,well it was funny that Zayn think that he was all the people.Two hours later the class finishes and I get out the classroom,i went to my locker to put inside it my things and go to brake,then when i close the door he was behind it.
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Mensaje por Ariadne Mac Guire Vie 08 Feb 2013, 1:25 pm

hi new reader well the novel is in my language please continue i really love it .

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Yeahh, i love it, follow please

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Mensaje por #Directioner23/7/10 Vie 08 Feb 2013, 1:33 pm

OMG!!
My name is Ana
I'm a New reader and I LOVE IT!!
Continue Please!!
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Mensaje por BombonHenderson13 Vie 08 Feb 2013, 1:40 pm

Yeah thanks girls,and for the ones that speak spanish I just publish te Spanish version!!Y will continue it now
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Chapter 2:When You look at me.

It was Louis the guy that was behind my locker´s door.

You:Dam!!Louis you scared me!!

Louis:I´m so ugly?.....

He was smiling.And I wanted to say him “Of corse NOT you´re the handsomest guy I never knew!!!”,But of course I could not say that,so I gave him a simple answer.

You:You know that´s not true.*I smile*

Louis:Woo,It´s good to know you think Im not ugly.

You:Well....

You:Do you need something?...

Louis:Yep.....

Louis:I was going to give you a tour around the school,or Im lying?

You:Let´s go.*I smile*

Louis take my hand and start walking,but then he stop and turn around to watch me,I see he´s blue eyes and I get lost in them,our looks keep connected for a moment,we could not move,in he´s eyes I just see a lot of love.

In Louis thought´s:She is beautiful,and when I was paralyzed in her green eyes I see love,kindness,and a honest girl,I was in love with her.

Then he shake he´s head and continue walking,he stops at the science lab,we get in.

Louis:This is our Science Lab.....

Louis:You will have a lot of fun here....

You:Wait there is water in the floor....

Louis:Do you want to see where do it come´s from?

You:Yes come on....

Louis go behind me but when I was walking on top of the water I slip,but Louis catch me.

Louis:Wow!!!....

Louis:Are u okay?*he smiles*

You:Yes thanks.....*I smile*

Again our looks get lost in each other,I did not think it was a coincidence,I think it was real love,real love between both and maybe he was not in love with me,but I was,and I was asking to myself.Are you gonna fight for this love?And i got a definitive answer......Yes.
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Mensaje por #Directioner23/7/10 Vie 08 Feb 2013, 1:46 pm

Amazing!!
I'm Spanish but I speak English and I prefer read the novel in English
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Mensaje por BombonHenderson13 Vie 08 Feb 2013, 1:47 pm

Hahaha,okay you could read it whatever you prefair!!!
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Chapter 2:When You look at me.

It was Louis the guy that was behind my locker´s door.

You:Dam!!Louis you scared me!!

Louis:I´m so ugly?.....

He was smiling.And I wanted to say him “Of corse NOT you´re the handsomest guy I never knew!!!”,But of course I could not say that,so I gave him a simple answer.

You:You know that´s not true.*I smile*

Louis:Woo,It´s good to know you think Im not ugly.

You:Well....

You:Do you need something?...

Louis:Yep.....

Louis:I was going to give you a tour around the school,or Im lying?

You:Let´s go.*I smile*

Louis take my hand and start walking,but then he stop and turn around to watch me,I see he´s blue eyes and I get lost in them,our looks keep connected for a moment,we could not move,in he´s eyes I just see a lot of love.

In Louis thought´s:She is beautiful,and when I was paralyzed in her green eyes I see love,kindness,and a honest girl,I was in love with her.

Then he shake he´s head and continue walking,he stops at the science lab,we get in.

Louis:This is our Science Lab.....

Louis:You will have a lot of fun here....

You:Wait there is water in the floor....

Louis:Do you want to see where do it come´s from?

You:Yes come on....

Louis go behind me but when I was walking on top of the water I slip,but Louis catch me.

Louis:Wow!!!....

Louis:Are u okay?*he smiles*

You:Yes thanks.....*I smile*

Again our looks get lost in each other,I did not think it was a coincidence,I think it was real love,real love between both and maybe he was not in love with me,but I was,and I was asking to myself.Are you gonna fight for this love?And i got a definitive answer......Yes.
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Mensaje por BombonHenderson13 Dom 10 Feb 2013, 10:33 am

coments for chapter 3!!!
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Mensaje por Ariadne Mac Guire Dom 10 Feb 2013, 10:34 am

Please follow well I speak or well my original language is English but I m not good in Spanish :(
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Mensaje por paoliss Dom 10 Feb 2013, 11:10 am

OMG!!!! Finally I found a English novel!!!!!
Wow!!! Well my name is Paola but you can
Call me Pao!!! My original language is Spanish!!!
But I study English so... I can read your novel!!!
Hahahahahha.... your novel is so amazing!!!
Well please continue it!! Please!!! Please!!!!
I Luv U!!! Kisses!!!! Xx :)
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Mensaje por BombonHenderson13 Dom 10 Feb 2013, 12:15 pm

Thanks,I will put a new chapter right now
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Chapter 3:Asking

Louis face was getting closer to mine each second when our nose´s where touching each other´s we close our eyes,he was going to kiss me,but in that second Liam get in to the Science Lab.

Liam:Andrea!!!!

Louis get scared and he let me fall at the floor then he give me he´s hand and help me to stand up again.

You:Liam!!!....

You:What are you doing here?!?!......

Liam:I was searching for you....

You:Just wait me a second..

Liam:Okay.

Louis:I´m so sorry......I..did not want.....

You:Don´t worry is okay...

Louis:Well if your not angry......

Louis:Would you like to go at night in a date with me?.....

You:Sure...

Louis:I go to your house at 7:00?....

You:Yes....

You:And where are we going?

Louis:To the cinema.

You:Okay...

You:See you later....

I gave Louis a kiss in his cheek and his face get coloured.Then Louis get out an Liam come in.

Liam:I will see you in the cafeteria Louis!!!!

Louis:Yes I see you there Liam!!!

You:Do you know him?.....

Liam:Yes...his member of our new band don´t you remember?...

You:Yes sorry.

You:So...what do you want?....

Liam:I wanted to know if you were going to eat alone?.....

You:Yes...I think so,it´s my first day and I don´t know anyone else than Louis.

Liam:Well you´re not now.

Liam brought my best friend,her name is Scarlett Williams she is a tall girl with dark hair and beautiful green eyes,she is my best friend since I have 5 years and she is like my sister.

You:Omg!!!Scarlett!!!

Scarlett:Yes I´m here!!!

Scarlett:Know you´re not going to take brake alone!!!

You:Thanks Liam!!!

Liam:You´re welcome little sister.

I was very happy to see Scarlett again because I did not see her for a long time.Scarlett finishes giving me the tour by school and when we finish we went to the cafeteria to eat something when we met with the guys.
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Mensaje por Ariadne Mac Guire Dom 10 Feb 2013, 1:02 pm

followwww I´m going to die really I love your novel :)
You can call me ari jeje well my real name is ariadne :)
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