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They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
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Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
OWWW !! THAT WAS VERY CUTE !! I LOVE YA! AND YOUR NOVEL TOO ! IT'S AMAZING ! SO, YOU KNOW BABE . I'M WAITING CHAPTER XD HAHAHA LOVE YOU BABE ♥.♥
Ingrid B.
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
What's going on babe? Why you don't risen chapter ??
Ingrid B.
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
wow :3... me mori ,,,
Pasense por mi novela :D https://onlywn.activoforo.com/t33230-un-agradable-comienzo-one-direction-y-pierina-tu-hot
Pasense por mi novela :D https://onlywn.activoforo.com/t33230-un-agradable-comienzo-one-direction-y-pierina-tu-hot
Pia_4e
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
HAHAHA SORRY GIRLS MY COMPUTER IS LIKE BLOCKED SO IT´S HARD TO ENTER,BUT I WILL OPLOAD A CHAPTER SOON I PROMISE!!!
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
Esto es interesante
La persona que
me lo envio, está todavia asombrada delo que ocurrio, ya que ella dice
que lo hizo por hacerlo y que pidio algo que creia imposible de lograr.
Probemos.
* Para ti mismo di el nombre de la única persona del sexo opuesto con quien quieras estar (tres veces...)...
* Piensa en algo que quieras lograr dentro de la próxima semana y repítelo para ti mismo(a) (seis veces)...
*
Piensa en algo que quieras que pase entre tú y la persona especial (que
dijiste en el no. 1) y dilo a ti mismo/a (doce veces)...
* Ahora haz un último y final deseo acerca del deseo que escogiste.
* Después de leer esto tienes 1 hora para mandarlo a 15 temas y lo que pediste se te hará realidad en 1 semana.
A
la mayor cantidad de gente a quien lo mandes más fuerte se hará tu
deseo. Si tu escoges ignorar esta carta lo contrario del deseo te
sucederá, o esto no sucederá jamás...
La persona que
me lo envio, está todavia asombrada delo que ocurrio, ya que ella dice
que lo hizo por hacerlo y que pidio algo que creia imposible de lograr.
Probemos.
* Para ti mismo di el nombre de la única persona del sexo opuesto con quien quieras estar (tres veces...)...
* Piensa en algo que quieras lograr dentro de la próxima semana y repítelo para ti mismo(a) (seis veces)...
*
Piensa en algo que quieras que pase entre tú y la persona especial (que
dijiste en el no. 1) y dilo a ti mismo/a (doce veces)...
* Ahora haz un último y final deseo acerca del deseo que escogiste.
* Después de leer esto tienes 1 hora para mandarlo a 15 temas y lo que pediste se te hará realidad en 1 semana.
A
la mayor cantidad de gente a quien lo mandes más fuerte se hará tu
deseo. Si tu escoges ignorar esta carta lo contrario del deseo te
sucederá, o esto no sucederá jamás...
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
PROMETO UN NUEVO CAPITULO PRONTO!!!
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
hahahaha, Ok, I'm waiting the chapter babe ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ But, A question. We can talk in espanish?
Ingrid B.
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
If u want,its not necesary to talk in engilsh but i prefair to practice this lenguage.;D
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
hahahaha ok. Sorry for not coment in those days , But I get out of the city so, I don't have internet :c But I come back so, Take your time to risen chapter love you !! :enamorado:
Ingrid B.
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
Yeah girls I know im the worst person in the world but today I will opload a chapter!!I promise!!!Kisses!!!
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
OMG your novel is.... is... so perfect..:s next chapter please
p.d:you need girl for a guy i'm here for you...
Where are you from??! I'm london but now i'm in mexico grax...
p.d:you need girl for a guy i'm here for you...
Where are you from??! I'm london but now i'm in mexico grax...
*Mony Styles *
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
I'm here!!! you speak english or spanish??? 'Cause i.. cann't speak spanish....well..i'm learning spanish but i'm in the level 3(are 9or 10 level)and i ask know: would you like answers in english or spanish??
I know i wrote much only for a question i'm crazy well continue it please!! kisse!!! ;)
I know i wrote much only for a question i'm crazy well continue it please!! kisse!!! ;)
*Mony Styles *
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
I prefair everybody ro speak in english,Im in México to but I like English,and thanks Im very happy because you like the novel,i will opload the chapter in a moment,kisses!!!
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
Girls here I let you the new Chapter!!!
Chapter 9:Vacation
That was the happiest week in my live on Friday we sit all together,the guys,Skyler and me.We start talking about our semestral vacations.
Niall:And where are you going on vacation?....
Harry:I have no idea,my parents don´t have any plan...
Zayn:And you Louis?...
Louis:I don´t know but I want to pass them with Andy...*he smiles and hug you*
You:Ow,Louis...
Liam:Am....
You:Liam!!!
Liam:What?I did not do anything!!!
Skyler:Come on Liam!!!You need to say the truth,your jealous!!!
Liam:Why should I be jealous?...
Liam:Your not with another guy....
Skyler:What?!?!
Liam:Nothing!!!
Zayn:Wait!!!I have an Idea!!!
You:What?
Zayn:What do you think If we go to....
Zayn:Costa Rica!!!
Niall:Costa Rica?....In America?
Zayn:Yeah!!!*he smiles*
Harry:It´s a great idea!!!
Liam:Yeah!!!We are going to...
Everybody:Costa Rica!!!
You:What do you think if we go....
Skyler & You:Tomorrow!!!
Louis:I´ll be ready!!!
Liam:Me to!!!
You:We met in my house at 7:00?....
Zayn:Yes...
Niall:Sure...
Harry:See you there!!!
We went to our classes,I could not believe it,we are going to Costa Rica,they say that is a very pretty place,that night I went to my bedroom and my brother came in.
Liam:You will sleep in one room with Skyler?....
You:Well if you want to be with her you can,and I will go with Louis....
Liam:Okay....Wait!!!What!!!
You:Don´t worry I will be a good girl...*i smile*
Liam:Isn´t that,but why should I sleep with Skyler?.....*he´s face get coloured and he get nervous*
You:Come on Liam!!!You can´t lie me,I know that you like her...*I smile*
Liam:M...me?....Pfff...No...*he look at me nervous*
You:Whatever...*i smile*
Liam:Don´t start with your jokes Andrea!!! *he look at me trying to make me feel scared*
You:Okay*I act like i was scared*
Liam:Woke up early tomorrow...*he laugh*
You:Okay,se you tomorrow...*i smile*
Liam:See you tomorrow....*he smiles*
I finish packing like at 1:00 am so of corse I did not wanted to woke up early the next morning,i was so tired that did not woke up at time,at the next day i was in my bed,but then i feel that someone was by my side,he put his hand in my cheek ad then he give me a kiss on the lips,I open my eyes,I feel that it was the prettiest way that i can woke up,watching Louis by my side smiling.
Louis:Good morning....*he smiles*
You:Good morning....*I smile*
Louis:Your brother was getting smoke from his ears...
You:Oh God!!!
I jump from the bed and see my watch.IT WAS 10:00 AM!!!
You:Oh My God!!!Liam is going to kill me!!!!*I run to the closet*
Louis:Don´t worry!!!*he stops you*
Louis:Skyler is with him,so he is like in another planet...*he smiles*
You:Yeah..*I smile*
You:I think so...
I gave Louis a kiss and then he smiles me.
Louis:I love when you do that....*he smiles*
You:Could you wait me downstairs?....
Louis:All the time you want...
Louis kiss me and he went downstairs.For the first time since I move to England Im going to use clothes for the Sun,well not exactly,flying to America will take us almost eight ours so I put something simple,for the sun and for the night because we were going to arrive very late there,I take a pink shirt and a pair of jeans,my tall open shoes and my sunglasses(clothes at the end of the chapter).I went downstairs and everybody was there.
You:Hi!!!
Harry:Hi!!!
Liam:Were late because of you....
You:Yes good morning for you too brother.....
Liam:Sorry,good morning....
Niall:Im ready....
Zayn:Can we go?...
Louis:Your so impatient....
Niall:You say it because it is your girlfriend....
Louis:Shut up....
You:Guys stop it....
You:Let´s go...
Everybody takes their luggage and we get out of the house.In one car were,Zayn,Niall,Louis and me,and in the other car were Skyler,Liam and Harry,All the way to the airport Zayn speak a lot,and he made absurd questions what makes me laugh a lot.
Zayn:Hey guys...
Louis:Now what Zayn...
Zayn:Do you like cookies?....*he put an interest face*
Niall:Yes Zayn...*he look at him desperate*
I was the only one laughing with his questions.
You:Come on guys....*i smile*
You:Don´t be so bitter.....
You:I like cookies Zayn...*I turn around and smile him*
Zayn:I like them but I could not eat them.....*he put sad dog face*
You:Why...*I smile*
Zayn:Because Im allergic and I get like this....
Zayn just start moving like a worm with salt,I start laughing and for the first time in all the way my boyfriend and Niall to,we get into the airport,the guys went to do the check in for the luggage while Skyler and me were talking,a tall guy with blond hair and clear eyes walk to us.
XXX:Don´t you remember me?...*he asked me*
Skyler:Hey you!!!go out of here or his boyfriend will come to kill you....
XXX:What,I could not say hello to an old friend?....*he smiles*
You:Thomas?!?!*I smile*
I jump from my seat and I hug him,Thomas is one of my best friends,I met him in U.S.A while I was living there,It´s a good friend of Liam to,and we used to play together when we where like 12 years old.
Thomas:Andrea!!!I can´t believe it you look so different,it was so hard to recognize you but i do it!!!
You:Oh Thomas I don´t see you from a lot of time!!!!
Skyler:Ahmmm.....Im sorry I did not even know that you were Andrea´s friend...*she smile*
Thomas:Don´t worry,my name is Thomas....*he smiles*
In that moment the guys came.
Zayn:Wait!!!Don´t touch her!!!
Skyler:Zayn!!!
Liam:Thomas?!?!
Thomas:Liam!!!
Liam:How much time!!!*he hugs Thomas*
Thomas:Yes I say the same!!!
In Louis thoughts:I did not even know who is him,but Andrea seems very happy to see him,I must maintain him remote of my girl.
I take Louis hand and take him where Thomas was.
You:Thomas,he is my boyfriend Louis....*i smile*
Thomas:Oh do you have a boyfriend?!?!*he seems surprised*
You:Haha very funny!!!
Thomas:You know I´m just joking...*he smiles*
Thomas:Nice to meet you...*he extend his hand and smile*
Louis:The same...*he gave him his hand and smile*
Liam:Well so why are you here Thomas?...
Thomas:Im traveling around the world!!!
Skyler:Really!!!That´s so cool!!!
Thomas:Yes,I just went to Africa,Asia and this is the last place from Europe....
Niall:And know where are you going?...
Thomas:Well Im visiting South America,starting from Costa Rica....
You:Were going to Costa Rica to....
Thomas:Well we will see there...
You:Okay...
Liam:Bye...
Im happy to see Thomas,because I did not see him from lot of time,Louis gave me my ticket and he takes his ticket,Zayn give Skyler her ticket and gets his own while the other guys had them.
Chapter 9:Vacation
That was the happiest week in my live on Friday we sit all together,the guys,Skyler and me.We start talking about our semestral vacations.
Niall:And where are you going on vacation?....
Harry:I have no idea,my parents don´t have any plan...
Zayn:And you Louis?...
Louis:I don´t know but I want to pass them with Andy...*he smiles and hug you*
You:Ow,Louis...
Liam:Am....
You:Liam!!!
Liam:What?I did not do anything!!!
Skyler:Come on Liam!!!You need to say the truth,your jealous!!!
Liam:Why should I be jealous?...
Liam:Your not with another guy....
Skyler:What?!?!
Liam:Nothing!!!
Zayn:Wait!!!I have an Idea!!!
You:What?
Zayn:What do you think If we go to....
Zayn:Costa Rica!!!
Niall:Costa Rica?....In America?
Zayn:Yeah!!!*he smiles*
Harry:It´s a great idea!!!
Liam:Yeah!!!We are going to...
Everybody:Costa Rica!!!
You:What do you think if we go....
Skyler & You:Tomorrow!!!
Louis:I´ll be ready!!!
Liam:Me to!!!
You:We met in my house at 7:00?....
Zayn:Yes...
Niall:Sure...
Harry:See you there!!!
We went to our classes,I could not believe it,we are going to Costa Rica,they say that is a very pretty place,that night I went to my bedroom and my brother came in.
Liam:You will sleep in one room with Skyler?....
You:Well if you want to be with her you can,and I will go with Louis....
Liam:Okay....Wait!!!What!!!
You:Don´t worry I will be a good girl...*i smile*
Liam:Isn´t that,but why should I sleep with Skyler?.....*he´s face get coloured and he get nervous*
You:Come on Liam!!!You can´t lie me,I know that you like her...*I smile*
Liam:M...me?....Pfff...No...*he look at me nervous*
You:Whatever...*i smile*
Liam:Don´t start with your jokes Andrea!!! *he look at me trying to make me feel scared*
You:Okay*I act like i was scared*
Liam:Woke up early tomorrow...*he laugh*
You:Okay,se you tomorrow...*i smile*
Liam:See you tomorrow....*he smiles*
I finish packing like at 1:00 am so of corse I did not wanted to woke up early the next morning,i was so tired that did not woke up at time,at the next day i was in my bed,but then i feel that someone was by my side,he put his hand in my cheek ad then he give me a kiss on the lips,I open my eyes,I feel that it was the prettiest way that i can woke up,watching Louis by my side smiling.
Louis:Good morning....*he smiles*
You:Good morning....*I smile*
Louis:Your brother was getting smoke from his ears...
You:Oh God!!!
I jump from the bed and see my watch.IT WAS 10:00 AM!!!
You:Oh My God!!!Liam is going to kill me!!!!*I run to the closet*
Louis:Don´t worry!!!*he stops you*
Louis:Skyler is with him,so he is like in another planet...*he smiles*
You:Yeah..*I smile*
You:I think so...
I gave Louis a kiss and then he smiles me.
Louis:I love when you do that....*he smiles*
You:Could you wait me downstairs?....
Louis:All the time you want...
Louis kiss me and he went downstairs.For the first time since I move to England Im going to use clothes for the Sun,well not exactly,flying to America will take us almost eight ours so I put something simple,for the sun and for the night because we were going to arrive very late there,I take a pink shirt and a pair of jeans,my tall open shoes and my sunglasses(clothes at the end of the chapter).I went downstairs and everybody was there.
You:Hi!!!
Harry:Hi!!!
Liam:Were late because of you....
You:Yes good morning for you too brother.....
Liam:Sorry,good morning....
Niall:Im ready....
Zayn:Can we go?...
Louis:Your so impatient....
Niall:You say it because it is your girlfriend....
Louis:Shut up....
You:Guys stop it....
You:Let´s go...
Everybody takes their luggage and we get out of the house.In one car were,Zayn,Niall,Louis and me,and in the other car were Skyler,Liam and Harry,All the way to the airport Zayn speak a lot,and he made absurd questions what makes me laugh a lot.
Zayn:Hey guys...
Louis:Now what Zayn...
Zayn:Do you like cookies?....*he put an interest face*
Niall:Yes Zayn...*he look at him desperate*
I was the only one laughing with his questions.
You:Come on guys....*i smile*
You:Don´t be so bitter.....
You:I like cookies Zayn...*I turn around and smile him*
Zayn:I like them but I could not eat them.....*he put sad dog face*
You:Why...*I smile*
Zayn:Because Im allergic and I get like this....
Zayn just start moving like a worm with salt,I start laughing and for the first time in all the way my boyfriend and Niall to,we get into the airport,the guys went to do the check in for the luggage while Skyler and me were talking,a tall guy with blond hair and clear eyes walk to us.
XXX:Don´t you remember me?...*he asked me*
Skyler:Hey you!!!go out of here or his boyfriend will come to kill you....
XXX:What,I could not say hello to an old friend?....*he smiles*
You:Thomas?!?!*I smile*
I jump from my seat and I hug him,Thomas is one of my best friends,I met him in U.S.A while I was living there,It´s a good friend of Liam to,and we used to play together when we where like 12 years old.
Thomas:Andrea!!!I can´t believe it you look so different,it was so hard to recognize you but i do it!!!
You:Oh Thomas I don´t see you from a lot of time!!!!
Skyler:Ahmmm.....Im sorry I did not even know that you were Andrea´s friend...*she smile*
Thomas:Don´t worry,my name is Thomas....*he smiles*
In that moment the guys came.
Zayn:Wait!!!Don´t touch her!!!
Skyler:Zayn!!!
Liam:Thomas?!?!
Thomas:Liam!!!
Liam:How much time!!!*he hugs Thomas*
Thomas:Yes I say the same!!!
In Louis thoughts:I did not even know who is him,but Andrea seems very happy to see him,I must maintain him remote of my girl.
I take Louis hand and take him where Thomas was.
You:Thomas,he is my boyfriend Louis....*i smile*
Thomas:Oh do you have a boyfriend?!?!*he seems surprised*
You:Haha very funny!!!
Thomas:You know I´m just joking...*he smiles*
Thomas:Nice to meet you...*he extend his hand and smile*
Louis:The same...*he gave him his hand and smile*
Liam:Well so why are you here Thomas?...
Thomas:Im traveling around the world!!!
Skyler:Really!!!That´s so cool!!!
Thomas:Yes,I just went to Africa,Asia and this is the last place from Europe....
Niall:And know where are you going?...
Thomas:Well Im visiting South America,starting from Costa Rica....
You:Were going to Costa Rica to....
Thomas:Well we will see there...
You:Okay...
Liam:Bye...
Im happy to see Thomas,because I did not see him from lot of time,Louis gave me my ticket and he takes his ticket,Zayn give Skyler her ticket and gets his own while the other guys had them.
BombonHenderson13
Re: They Don´t Know About Us (Louis y Tu)_Novela en Ingles
OMG sorry for don't coment but the school and the work and you know no??? Ok i'm crazy!!!jejejej ok no and you're very cute!!awww ok stop!! Continue it please beautiful writer kisses!! ;)
*Mony Styles *
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